5 sentence challenge

The  water is  going  in  the  pool.

The powfull   water is splashing on me.

I can hear parrots squawking in the trees.

I can hear the waterfall.

I can see people watching the powerful waterfall.

by Hattie and Isabella

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5 sentence challenge

The  water  full  is  going  splash  splash  splash  into  the  pond.

There  is  lots  of bright green leaves.

The people are watching the water fall going splash splosh splash splosh

I can hear the trees going swish swosh swish swash.

There is lots of green trees in the way of the sun.

By  Luke purdy    Mayla  emily

Thistle Class 5 Sentence Challenge Story

Today, we decided to try something a bit different and write a story as a class based on the 5 Sentence Challenge picture. We hope you enjoy reading it….

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Early one morning, Jack got out of bed and put his smart uniform on. He went into his back garden and got his shiny red bike out of the dark brown shed. Jack pedalled quickly to the post office which was just down the road from his house. Mrs Browning gave Jack a ginormous sack full of letters and parcels. Jack put the sack on the front of his bike and went off to deliver the letters. He went to the village square and delivered lots of post. When he got to the village square he met the milkman. Suddenly, the church bells started to ring. Jack knew this meant it was lunchtime so he got off of his bike, stood it against the wall and went into the tea rooms for a sandwich and a cup of tea.