Today, we decided to try something a bit different and write a story as a class based on the 5 Sentence Challenge picture. We hope you enjoy reading it….
Early one morning, Jack got out of bed and put his smart uniform on. He went into his back garden and got his shiny red bike out of the dark brown shed. Jack pedalled quickly to the post office which was just down the road from his house. Mrs Browning gave Jack a ginormous sack full of letters and parcels. Jack put the sack on the front of his bike and went off to deliver the letters. He went to the village square and delivered lots of post. When he got to the village square he met the milkman. Suddenly, the church bells started to ring. Jack knew this meant it was lunchtime so he got off of his bike, stood it against the wall and went into the tea rooms for a sandwich and a cup of tea.
The red and white boat is in France.
Do you see that there is a fair ground over there .
On the front of the boat there are white numbers on there.
The sky is a little bit grey .
People go and see the boat .
by may and chloe
The feris weel is red and white like a candy cain.
The big red ship is white and red.
The scy is blou ish.
The man is not wering a teeshert.
The water is not bluo.
by Lewis and George
There is a man with no top on.
The big big whiyl hase big red and white pols.
The flags are culrful and hiy.
The big boat is red and white.
On the boat there are big poles and they are yellow.
by Stanley and Luke
The big red boat is salling on the sea.
The sky is blue and cloudy.
There is a man sitting on the brick wall.
There are some flags waving in the wind .
The sun is shining on the sea.
by Alice and Boo
In Thistle class this week we just HAD to talk about our snow day and what we all enjoyed getting up to whilst school was closed on Friday. The children all wrote some beautiful sentences about their first experiences of snow and then we all went into the Westwood Radio studio to record our thoughts to share with you all! Please leave us a comment and tell us what you did on your snow day…
the grandad is fixing the dols house for the litl girl.
The litl gir is warering a yetablilo teesharet.
The wever outsid is suny.
theare is abroun table in the shed.
william and Erin
We haf in jot gowng to bristl.
We lic dawnn the 5 sents chalinj.
We lic ridn the story wot efr next.
we lic down ber on bred.
we lic ridn the story beegu.
biy stanley and mayla
we hav injie patin. we hav injied macin bear on tost. we went to wee the cyrore
we lhav been jiein
by Sophie and Erin
The doncees are tircwor broun. The pinc flouoo. The doncees are wispring sunthing. The ducs wit as sno.